Past Us:
Past the art museums
past the electric sharks
Somewhere at the beginning
but not at the start
We wander like vagabonds
over red, orange, green maps
We wander through legends
till our paths are etched back.
Poe Tries:
When did Poe try
to make us smile?
Contemporary lines,
walk a mile.
To Yeats, Briefly:
Teach me of gyre's father!
Teach me how to be a man..
I feel you know so much about life and love,
more than I can ever understand.
White Elephants: (soooo corny!)
Pouring words through a typewriter,
like a drowned man, in a terse room,
I wonder; a fathom of ways,
how to see my old love exhumed.
I could bring her flowers, and yet,
what pedal ever matched her smile?
I could write her poems, and still yet,
what poem could ever stay a while?
I could sing her songs, odes, ballards,
might a fuge mimick us in bed?
I could paint her (though not very well),
but who on hues is ever fed?
Oh what to make of a sad end,
and how to let one go although,
you may never see them again.
I have learned much of cant's, wont's,
enough to make me a little wise,
that goodbye is not good, nor bye.
Train Thoughts 1:
It's good to see the trees blossoming
makes me feel like someone
knows what they're doing,
since I sure don't.
We Are Going to Paris:
We are going to Paris
because I want to.
We are going to Paris
because of the small of your back.
We are going to Paris
so I can see the eiffle towre.
We are going to Paris
so I can walk next to the louvre.
We are going to Paris
because I wish to see a sunset.
We are going to Paris
because we are going nowhere.
Past Us is my favorite of the bunch, followed closely by We're Going to Paris. For the record I wasn't boycotting them, it was just Strauss Overload.
ReplyDeleteIn White Elephants I think you mean petals and not pedals, or I am seriously missing something. And corny is an understatement as far as the title goes. I'd work on that a bit, maybe pick something on a typewriter?
In general you have a very serious humor about your poems. It shows in your short story some as well. Train Thoughts 1 is probably the most condensed version of what I'm trying to say. I think it would make an excellent series.
Yea. On to round 2.