Sunday, July 19, 2009

On The Avenue

In the brick park at Hanlon Square,
the rusted, old Spanish bum sits on
brown oak bench in the bomb of golden dawn,

pouring imaginary vapor
from frayed denim pocket
full of plastic vodka.

And all the while,
without spilling,
whistles for a cigarette,
like the wingless dove,
stomping on crimson
blocks of concrete land.


The alchemist arrives
in green streetcar
and spins the gray
silk mountain into
dusty grain of stone.

He waves with the
wingless dove and
white noon in the
cool June blue air.

And there,
in the busy swing of afternoon,
the rotary telescope moves to the icy coast

past the orange
shimmer of mesquite bridge blowing,
through giant rays of raw sun brushing
steel figures with gentle stroke of light,

and on to where
the black bear crows,

and us sailing the velvet
wind West on riverboat.

2 comments:

  1. Anonymous20/7/09 17:25

    Will, I really enjoyed this. The image of dawn as a kind of explosion is beautiful and an image that feels so fresh to me. You really have a way with imagery. Like I told you in class once, you have a very "painterly style" of writing.

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  2. seconded. But since I have to play my usual debbie downer self I think you can work a couple lines over some more, and it might just be verb tenses that do the trick. I would imagine you know where they are.

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