Wednesday, October 28, 2009

ON OUR WAY



The big old moon died. All the trees had turned out their green. People came for the fall spectacle, but the color had long since passed, and they had gone away. The branches were naked, now, stripped for cold. A chronic wind cursed the town. A sad sun struck the morning bell, void of permanence. It fell before it rose and an empty light filled in everywhere.

Charlie Clemons, a ripened man in the late years of his life, sat at a table facing the bedroom. The light entered the second floor apartment through the window above his bed. It jumped along the floor and settled smoothly on his hands. He dealt out a game of solitaire from a deck of cards, shuffled with vigor three times over. His wife, Gloria, had come from the bedroom, showered and freshly powdered, with water falling from her hair. The drops hit the floor and slapped against the wood.

She snuck up behind Thomas, who sat tired, almost sleeping on his chest and kissed him lightly on his forehead. “You feel awfully warm, dear, ” she walked to the sink and filled a pot of faucet water for tea. The stove fired like a blank round and finally lit a hissing blue. Charlie had finished his game and smiled at her. He had spent the past fifteens years, each morning, trying to beat his record of fifty-three seconds. She reached over near the sink and snatched the cup that stored his teeth. Under a stream of cold water she rinsed the teeth and placed them, on a napkin, in front of him. It always took a few tries to get the damn things in his mouth.

“Ah, there we go,” as he tried to fit them in just right his face tightened and made crooked shapes. “Thomas, let me have some of that,” pointing to a glass of water. He gargled a sip to make sure they were snug. “I bet you wish I lost these,” Charlie said.

“Wouldn’t have to hear you go on and on all the time,” Thomas said.

“You’d miss it. Tell him—,” he said. Charlie walked over to his desk and turned on a box radio that was leaning on the wall behind the desk. A heavy wood chair was pushed beneath the desk. Although it was messy, it was manageable, and had noticeable use. There was an old Smith & Corona, a rusty soup can full of black pens and sharpened pencils, a matchbook, two perfect pink erasers, abandoned paper clips, bent push pins, and all his lucky pennies arranged neatly on the space not occupied by the radio.

“I’m not sayin’ a thing,” she said. “Can’t have a woman getting in the way of men.” The water began to slap on the inside of the steel pot, getting ready to whistle. She brought three mugs to the table. As the water left the pot, it left a trail of steam in the air. “Sweetie you really don’t look good. All the color is almost out of you,” she said. “You make sure to drink that up.”

“She’s right boy. Look at them toes of yours,” Charlie said. He came back to his seat and pushed it back a bit so that his legs were stretched beneath the kitchen table.

“Huh?” Thomas said as he swept dirt on the floor into piles under his feet.

“Your toes, kid—they’re curling,”

“What about my toes?” He said.

“They’re curling.” He said.

“So?” He said.

“Rub some lotion on ‘em.” He said.

“What?” He said.

“Any old fella’ would have told you the same thing.” He said.

“Hell, man.” He said.

“I’m just sayin’, kid. You gotta know these things.” He said.

“Here, make him happy,” handing Thomas a bottle of lotion. “But please, please stop all this talk so early in the morning.” She said.

“Make sure you get it all up between the toes,” he said. “How ‘bout some breakfast?” Charlie said.

“Excuse me?” She said.

““Darling, would you mind making us some breakfast?” He said.

“It will be ready soon.” She said.

“Don’t worry about me. I better get going,” Thomas said. “I’ve got things to take care of today.” He got up from his seat, kissed Gloria goodbye and walked out the door. They could hear him on the stairs. The door slammed and he went off down the street.

“I worry about that boy,” she said. The eggs were finished cooking. She carried the plates in one arm and set them on the table. The light had moved off the table and met on the ceiling, complete and absolute. In the light, her eyes were a strange and dangerous green.

“Yeah, he’s a piece of work. No one is ever going to set him straight. “ He said.

“That’s what they said about you.” She said.

“He doesn’t have a woman like you. “ He said.

“He could.“ She said.

“Not like this.” He said.

“You do.” She said.

“They’re ain’t many people like you and me anymore.” He said.

“Somewhere.“ She said.

“Maybe.“ He said.

“I sure do hope so.” She said, kissing him.

“What time is it?” He asked.

“Almost nine.” She said.

“I better get going. “ He said.

“Me too.“ She said.

Wednesday, October 7, 2009

Hey! I apologize for not paying attention for a while. I've been buried under pounds of reading to the point where I decided to put off of my GRE's till the spring (and grad school a semester in turn). I should have my stuff up very soon for the magazine (I'll email it all to you Mike). I have some new writings, also! Here is a very rough draft of a very short story I wrote in class part for fun and part for an in class prompt concerning utopias:

Jon had never plugged in before. Growing up on an archic farm, his life had consisted of milking cows, feeding pigs, tending to the crops. His folks told him it was for his own protection. The world had changed much since they were youths lost in the middle of a country. Now was the time of progress, change, evolution. Now was the time for Jon to stop listening to his parents and decide for himself. From an early age Jon seemed to be suited for more intellectual persuits: his parents hadn't beat him at chess in over 5 years. His friends ideas of fun often seemed dull to Jon. He wanted something bigger than the isolation of a farmining town. He wanted to plug in.
Jon lay in the chair: a seat that reclined softly, humming the florescent photon of cables and glowing screens. His friend Albert had been waiting forever to show him what it was like, but Jon had always played the good child. Now his desire for the unknown had finally gotten the best of him, and he was ready to give it a whirl, or a flop. He figideted with the straps, adjusting and readjusting them in his nervousness. "She's almost warmed up, you ready to get your brain toasted?" Albert asked with manical smile. "Uhm, I guess..." Albert's fingers flew to the wall of buttoms and neon, flicking switchs and tapping screens. "All protocals are go, interfacing starts in..." The back of Jon's neck began to warm, as the device resting in the chairs headrest seemed to start humming deeply. Jon twitched, wondering if he had made the wrong choice. Will I be the same after? Will everything change? Will I be a different person? I like the person I am... Jon felt a warm breeze on his wet forhead as Albert finished with the console and cracked open a window. "Trust me, you'll be fine; mostly." Albert cheered. Jon wanted to leave very badly but couldn't, and he knew that. Suddenly his vision went white, his ears rang softly, and his skin tingled. Jon was plugged in.